Saturday, October 15, 2011

First Paragraph of 2Syn Paper

Dr. Eliphalet Oram Lyte and Dr. Hugh Herr are two visionaries who lived in two very different time periods. Lyte comes from the late nineteenth century and early twentieth century, and Herr from the end of the twentieth century to the early twenty-first century. However, both were motivational speakers who read inspirational speeches. Oram Lyte delivered a well-written address dealing with the many levels of loyalty, instilling in each graduate a will to govern the outcome of their future. Hugh Herr’s message was that despite all odds a person could make a difference in the world. Therefore one cannot judge a book by its cover and think that these two monumental figures have nothing in common. You have to see the purpose that drives these men forward, and that purpose is to motivate their peers.

After reading this first paragraph what do you think my paper will be about?

2 comments:

  1. From the first paragraph I feel that your paper is about the comparison between the two Doctors speeches and how they effected their audiences.

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  2. From your first paragraph, I think that it is about two different men giving two different speeches.

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